Reviewer | Date | Chapter | Type |
budwench29 | 2002-03-31 | 5 | Signed |
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Awww!! This was so great! I love how it ended. None of the Hollywood stuff, just Jeff getting his smile back and being ready to race. Excellent job! | |||
CB | 2002-03-31 | 5 | Anonymous |
This was a great story! You could write more, though.........! I enjoyed reading it! I can't wait for more Jeff vs Brooke in the news. | |||
Christy Gordon | 2002-03-29 | 5 | Signed |
Dude...I really want to smack myself upside the head...I didn't catch something while I was betareading that I just noticed...ya spelled Robbie Loomis' name wrong...lol, Robbie, not Robby....my bad! hehe...I think I need to go hide in a dark closet or something now so you don't hit me...lol :) Ahem...sorry bout that...ain't that big of a deal anyway...nobody but me problably even noticed...anyhoo...Loved the story...it was awesome! (Had to use my Jeff Gordon word in a Jeff Gordon fic ya know!) Now, get to writing...cause I wanna beta read something else...lol, although I know I should go write so you can beta read something! lol :) Anyway...great job...you are such a good writer! I'm jealous! lol :) | |||
TweedleDuh | 2002-03-29 | 5 | Signed |
AWw! its all over! aww man! hehe I loved the story and i don't even like Jeff hehe... hope you get to your next fic soon! | |||
Ashley | 2002-03-28 | 4 | Anonymous |
That was great please continue I want to know what happens in Heltons Office it should be good | |||
Katie (RebelFlamingo83@aol.com) | 2002-03-27 | 4 | Anonymous |
Hey again! :) Great chapter! lol I wish Jeff would cock back and hit someone once. Then maybe people like me wouldn't doubt his masculinity. ():) Take care and update soon! :D | |||
Katie (RebelFlamingo83@aol.com) | 2002-03-27 | 3 | Anonymous |
Hey! :) GREAT chapter! Michael cracks me up! I think you should work the "turkey walk" into the story! lmao Thanks for answering my question! :) | |||
TweedleDuh | 2002-03-27 | 4 | Signed |
I just wanna say first off... LIMP BIZKIT RULES!! A hemm.. hehe ok.. My jaw dropped when i read what Tony said.. WHOAAAAA HARSH! glad Jeff got in a punch! But you and me both no that if Tony and Jeff started to throw down Tony would have the advantage lol.. Glad you got this in before i had to go to class! Stinkin FF.n problems.. grrr | |||
Haven Fawkes | 2002-03-26 | 3 | Signed |
Awww this is great! Poor Jeffy-Weffy. And I loved the pary when Mikey was holding Kaitlyn(Caitlyn?) away by putting his palm on her forehead. My Daddy and brothers would always do that to me when we were play wrestling and I *HATED* it! Can't wait to read more. | |||
chipperjonesgurl | 2002-03-26 | 3 | Signed |
That was cute how Michael was playing with his girls! Poor Jeff needs a few running around! I say it again Brooke doesn't know what she left slip through her fingers! | |||
budwench29 | 2002-03-25 | 3 | Signed |
I loved this little domestic scene! It was so sweet, and I loved the fact that Jeff helped Macy and Caitlyn the prize. That was cool! Though I have to say I'm with Tweedle in that I can't believe I'm actually feeling for Jeff. Anyway, this is going great. Oh, and btw, I think I've got a plot to go with the Super Squirrel story I was telling you about :D. When I'm on the plane tomorrow, I'll be sketching it out. Anyway, please hurry and write more :). | |||
TweedleDuh | 2002-03-25 | 3 | Signed |
LOL! "I LIKE little pink bracelets!!" that was greaT! Poor Jeff.. ~cringe~ see i still cant believe i'm saying that! Damn it now i want some pancakes!!! cant wait to see where your going with this! I know ya JUST posted but.. its not too early to say.. POST MORE SOON! | |||
Katie (RebelFlamingo83@aol.com) | 2002-03-25 | 2 | Anonymous |
Another great chapter! Although I really wish someone would write a story where Jeff was a bad guy. I PROMISE that's not because I detest him. It's in support of character development. lol In all seriousness, you're a fantastic writer, and I hope you update soon! Also, since I haven't read the article, what made you so mad about it? Just wondering. Take care! | |||
chipperjonesgurl | 2002-03-25 | 2 | Signed |
Raises her hand eagerly: If Brooke doesn't want him I do!!! BUt ya know are right if Brooke doesn't want him there is something wrong with her! Anyone would be lucky to have Jeff as a husband. Brooke doesn't know just wha she is leaving behind! | |||
budwench29 | 2002-03-24 | 2 | Signed |
Poor Jeff! I can't imagine what that must
be like, but I actually have to feel kind of sorry for him. I love it that
Mikey's helping him out though (go Mikey!). Hmm, I'm wondering how this is
going to turn out though. Is Jeff going to find someone else, or are he
and Brooke going to get back together? And how does Tony Stewart fit into
this? Can't wait to see where this is going! Go Flying Squirrel! |